WritingConsistency

Check for consistent tense usage

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Original Paragraph:
Yesterday, she decides to visit the museum because she heard about a new exhibit. When she arrives, she was amazed by the artwork and spends hours exploring each gallery. Later, she writes about her experience in her journal.

Corrected Paragraph (Consistent Past Tense):
Yesterday, she decided to visit the museum because she had heard about a new exhibit. When she arrived, she was amazed by the artwork and spent hours exploring each gallery. Later, she wrote about her experience in her journal.

Explanation of Edits:

  1. Changed “decides” to “decided” to match the past tense context established by “Yesterday.”
  2. Updated “heard” to “had heard” to reflect the past perfect tense, indicating that hearing about the exhibit occurred before the decision to visit.
  3. Revised “spends” to “spent” to ensure consistency with the past tense narrative.
  4. Adjusted “writes” to “wrote” for uniformity in tense.
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